A Paragraph Improvement.

Paragraph Improvement

The first thing I noticed about the sound was the use of the slow and feminine instruments like the violin when she was alone with the Fingersmith. The use of this portrays intimacy and her lust and love of the Fingersmith, constructing homosexual representations of her. The next thing I noticed was the faster, more masculine music with the use of drums and cymbals to portray the straight male. The use of this music shows him as heterosexual and gives us an immediate character judgement of his obvious dominance over the homosexual woman. Another thing I noticed was the sound of the dropping red paint. This diegetic sound when she is looking at the Fingersmith implies sexual arousal and displays her lust for the woman. The final thing I noticed was the faster music when the heterosexual male spoke. This use of sound showed danger and portrayed that the woman had no desire to marry him, portraying that homosexuality has triumphed over heterosexuality at this point.